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- Rather strongly developed (at least the first chapter is); a detailed read. The second chapter is jibberish in comparison....
Given Literary merit by User:Dhabih
- No comment. Was originally a 3/5....
Given Literary , Novelty by David
- Very nice story. It depicts students and teachers the way they are, including the lesbian/feminist Dana. I think she could be thrown out of the story, but, anyway, I don't know where the action goes. I suggest the author completes it. If not, I would have to do it....