Talk:The Bender Family Case

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Not done as yet. Kolver The Bard 22:26, 26 November 2007 (UTC)

You sure? It seems done to me. Very anticlimactical story.    00:58, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

I can see where it could be expanded, though I like it how it is now also. I'd go over it and correct the missing letters, but I'm not sure if you for some reason wish those be there. As for the story, I found it interesting enough to read through, though it is indeed anticlimactic for such a calling of attention. But who knows, praps the anticlimax is simply strengthened through it all. Though the memory of names bit was broken by his knowing the name of KateUser:Serprex

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Anticlimactical. Spelling problems. Too simplistic and hence unrealistic. No thought involved. No character and plot description. Hearsay cast to be 100% correct. Ending didn't make much sense....