Talk:Rosen Cruz

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Nice and short,and yes...it does seem a little forced(But so much that it just makes you stagger and thus not jump over details)User:Serprex 01:14, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

The forcedness was entirely intentional, I was mocking forced poetry. --Nonimportant 01:17, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

I know,you said soUser:Serprex 01:20, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

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The rhyming was definitely forced in this one, with "did", "till the top", "fave", and dangling "save". The fact that it's forced makes it sound awkward....