LawlUser:Serprex 22:53, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
Okay, feedback:
- It's rather simplistic.
- It's straight to the point.
Well, this could be either good or bad, depending on what you're aiming for...
Good shot at being "positive", though it's kind of a despicable goal according to society's standards... lol 09:33, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
Uh...why is everyone laughing at this? I thought it was about...bigamy? Not that it's wrong, but it doesn't strike me as particularly funny. --Nonimportant 23:50, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
I'm laughing cuz tisn't all that positive...and well,these type of clichés make me laughUser:Serprex 00:02, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
I didn't think it was funny. [Keeping within standards of modern society], I think it's outright a despicable goal and whoever would want to achieve it obviously has lost their mind and is in blatant love with their lust. Still, it's positive...er than my last attempts at poetry. F.＜話して～！！＞02:34, 23 June 2007 (UTC)~
Yes,it adds variety.Something I find important for Novelas.Stories are for the beholder,so...User:Serprex 03:15, 23 June 2007 (UTC)