Talk:Into the Graveyard

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This was good. The suspense, the characters, the flow. Descriptions were kept to a length I can't argue with and dialogue kept to being realistic. Besides the style being well formatted, the story itself was satisfyingUser:Serprex 07:39, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

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Just the right amount of description. Just a bit too text-book of a story.    20:17, 15 January 2008 (UTC)