Talk:Goods

Fiction Wikia, the place where you can write fiction.

This is an original story of mine, which grew longer and (I think) better. However, I just can't finish it--maybe it is finished, who knows. I don't much care about being published and I don't much believe in intellectual property, and so I'm releasing it here.

It should probably be split into sections and such, and it's been edited but there's never too much editing. Enjoy and do with it what you will, oh wikicity.

The word cum really ruins the whole thing. Consider using something suggestive. Since using it as the first sentence still doesn't make much sense.

There's a certain 'truth in advertising' though, to have that word right in the beginning of the story. This isn't exactly a suggestive story--it's pretty dirty. However, maybe 'it' would work better (And be more in line with her personality). The opening could probably be reworked so that she sees 'it' and we all know what 'it' is and 'it' ain't such a nice thing to find on one's sheets.