Talk:Circles

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Given Literary insight , Humor novelty by F.＜話して～！！＞ 01:04, 4 May 2008 (UTC)

Interesting poem, with an interesting flow. Began to get a little repetitive at the end, and I felt some parts were too articulated and almost clinical. I liked the way the rhyming breaks off at the end...