Talk:A prophecy in stone

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[edit] Review by: Yunzhong Hou ^{5000+ edits}

Interesting beginning. But from what I'm reading, the two "evils" aren't very clear. I suppose you'll elaborate? Yunzhong Hou ^{5000+ edits} 15:54, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for the advice. I clarified it in the story; its the mountain-top removal and Jerusalem.

Falconier111 March 20 18:56 2007

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A very strong, if minimal, piece of work. Not quite a story, but a bit emotional nevertheless....