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Talk:A little to the left

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Bit too vague for my tastes, and the ending started to lose focus on what possible story I took it to be, and instead made it seem an odd crunch in end. Personally I thought it some thing to do with the teller being a rapist, but that's probably not the intent. Can't wait to hear what Yunz has to sayUser:Serprex 13:27, 12 December 2007 (UTC)

  • coughs up blood from all the bad literature* Can't... speak... *gurgle gurgle*    Yunzhong Hou (10k+ edits) 20:40, 12 December 2007 (UTC)